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Thursday, 27 September 2018

T3w10 writing

this week I have been using  capital words and full stops and using the drive with writing


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6 comments:

  1. Miss Walters28 September 2018 at 13:38

    Hi Dakota,

    Well done for your first story posted on your blog! You have clearly tried really hard to get the illustrations and backgrounds to match your story and it's great! Next time make sure that you finish all the writing before you start the pictures so people can read the whole thing :)

    From Miss W

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  2. Anonymous25 October 2018 at 09:33

    hi dakota I love your work and you have been writing about the green ninja and red and white and blue

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  3. Anonymous25 October 2018 at 09:43

    where is the water and rock ninja?

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  4. Anonymous26 October 2018 at 10:16

    great job I love your pictures they look the same as the ninjas

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  5. Anonymous26 October 2018 at 10:22

    i like how you write about ninja it was cool from jayden

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